domingo, 29 de enero de 2012

Homework!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Homework




The name of my alebrije is Topitsi.

One day playing soccer, Topitsi was behind of a tree on having gone I for the ball look at it playing with the ball and then adopt it.

Topitsi is very happy, providing that I am with we play soccer and video games and always it wins.

Me too few many things it brings over of a “garden of the happiness ". A place very strange but full of tranquility in which many creatures exist as.

One day that was the best of all, we find a plant I believe they were calling her ganja, this plant was managing to transport ourselves to this great place.

It is because of it that Topitsi is my best friend with whom I have shared many so brilliant things bad only one is that after going out of the garden already I do not turn it to seeing only when I obtain a bit of ganja.





1 comentario:

  1. Hi,

    it is difficult to understand what you want to say. It has lots of grammatical mistakes and you scarcely use the past simple tense. It is mostly in present.
    Did you use google translator?

    Score: 5

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