lunes, 30 de enero de 2012

One day I was walking and I found a very strange animal-tailed scorpion, turtle body, head viper, gecko feet.
After a ride home and when I saw my mom cry and faint, so let it go.

1 comentario:

  1. Good description but still problems with simple past structures: After coming home, I saw my mom crying and then she fainted, so I let it go.

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