Pag. 43 Exercise 4
When did
last see your friends?
Yesterday afternoon.
Yesterday afternoon.
When did you first travel by plane?
I've never traveled by plane.
How long did start learning English?
Four years ago.
When did you last visit Zoo?
Around eight years ago.
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Alebrije's History
This is the story of me alebrije.
His name was Iztli. He loved to fly and climb walls.
I met him one day while visiting a strange antique shop, was in a jar that my family bought it and gave me. I decided to clean it and put it in my bedroom.
When I reached into the jar, I felt that I was bitten by something, but not hurted, it felt warm, i'm had scared, suddenly, he out of the jar, it was a small lizard, which soon spread wings like a strange insect, gecko feet, and tail with a strange fire, suddenly he told me!
He left fly and me explain that a link had "special", and that he would be taking care of me wherever, wherever, as long as you give to drink and eat always, I agreed.
The years passed and one day, suddenly the flame of his tail was gone, he said the life of your species was not prolonged, but did not die, they become and be reborn under the ashes inside the jar but otherwise.
They spent 3 days and heard something strange in the jar, iztli had become an arrowhead made of very thin obsidian, seeing the arrow at the sun, you could see the outline of him.
His name was Iztli. He loved to fly and climb walls.
I met him one day while visiting a strange antique shop, was in a jar that my family bought it and gave me. I decided to clean it and put it in my bedroom.
When I reached into the jar, I felt that I was bitten by something, but not hurted, it felt warm, i'm had scared, suddenly, he out of the jar, it was a small lizard, which soon spread wings like a strange insect, gecko feet, and tail with a strange fire, suddenly he told me!
He left fly and me explain that a link had "special", and that he would be taking care of me wherever, wherever, as long as you give to drink and eat always, I agreed.
The years passed and one day, suddenly the flame of his tail was gone, he said the life of your species was not prolonged, but did not die, they become and be reborn under the ashes inside the jar but otherwise.
They spent 3 days and heard something strange in the jar, iztli had become an arrowhead made of very thin obsidian, seeing the arrow at the sun, you could see the outline of him.
Hi,
ResponderEliminarJust some problems with grammar:
compare, When did last see vs When did you last...
How long did start vs How long did you...
Score: 9
About your Alebrije,
ResponderEliminarWell, you have some problems with grammar, but punctuation is correct. I can understand most of what you wrote.
Score: 9